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李　峰

学生习作：

Its Friday, November 14th. Im happy today. In1 8 oclock I have Chinese. I like it because its fun. Then I have math and art. In2 this day I can have P.E. in the afternoon. Thats my favorite subject. I play football and basketball. Then I have a two-days3 holiday. At 6 oclock p.m. I can swimming4 for an hour. In5 Friday evening I have a party with my friends.

名师点评：本篇按照时间顺序，从早到晚记录自己最喜欢的一天，条理清晰，语言简洁，值得大家学习。但是仍有几处错误，需要注意。

1. 具体某一时刻前要用介词at, 具体某一天则用介词on。

2. 上面已经提到过，“this day”为具体某一天，其前用介词on。

3. “数量+名词”。要注意名词一定用单数形式。两天的假期，two-day holiday。

4. can为情态动词，其后接动词原形，应改为swim。

5. 某一天的早上、中午、晚上前用介词on, 即On Friday evening。

范文：

My Favorite Day

Its Friday, November 14th. Im happy today. At 8 oclock I have Chinese. I like it because its fun. Then I have math and art. On this day, I can have P.E. in the afternoon. Thats my favorite subject. I play football and basketball. Then I have a two-day holiday. At 6 oclock p.m. I can swim for an hour. On Friday evening I have a party with my friends.