How to Make Our City Cleaner and Greener

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As we all know， our environment is getting worse. What should we do ？

We are going to make the subway better. Then people dont have to drive to work. We should plant more trees. Then the air will be fresher. The traffic is busy. If possible， were going to ride bikes to school. And were not going to pour dirty water into the rivers. Then the rivers can be clean .Were not going to drop litter everywhere.

Lets start from now on！ Our city will be cleaner and greener.

简评：

本文是新目标英语八年级上册第六单元中的一个写作话题。重点练习be going to 句型。小作者运用了该句型的肯定式和否定式，结合情态动词的用法把文章主题明确地表达出来，用词恰当、句意通顺，值得借鉴。

指导教师： 王宝祥