My Friends

李芳菲

In our daily life， We always stay with our friends. Well be happy if we have some friends， but well feel lonely without friends just like a life without the sun. Nobody can live alone in the world， so we must make some friends. I have some friends luckily. We play and study together every day and we pull together to get our study aims. When I am in trouble， my friends will give me a hand and cheer me up ；When I make a mistake， they will give me some help and trust me that I can out of the mistake. We still share not only happiness but also sadness together. I think a true friend plays an important role in our life. I will always love them forever.

简评：

本篇习作以朋友为主线，阐明了朋友在日常生活中的重要地位。文章首尾呼应，主题清晰，句子之间衔接自然，复合句使用恰当，但有些语言还应该更加精炼。总体来说，这是一篇不错的英语习作。

指导教师：关春晓