My English Learning

范玙瑄

Hello， everyone！ Im Lucy. Im your friend. Let me tell you about my English learning.

Four years ago，I began to learn English. We have learned a lot words and sentences， and I can use them in and out of class. My English teacher is a young teacher， but she is a wise teacher. I like my English teacher very much！ Because she taught us in many ways. In English lessons， I listened to my English teacher carefully. Out of English lesson， we often sang， danced， chanted and played games. Our English teacher usually let us do things by ourselves. We did role play. We acted in drama. Now I can use words and sentences to tell stories.

In English lessons， Im very happy！ From English lessons and English teacher， I know learning English is a very happy thing.

简评：

该篇习作结构完整，有条理，细节充实，语句通顺流畅，语言逻辑清晰。小作者将英语学习的时间、学习方法以及学习成果描述得很清楚。

指导教师：王雪娟