从不同体裁谈书面表达过渡性词汇的使用方法

2008-04-29 07:23崔秀芬
中学生英语高效课堂探究 2008年4期
关键词:追星书面图表

崔秀芬

高考英语书面表达评分标准规定,考生必须使用过渡性词汇来增强文章的连贯性、逻辑性和情感性,可见能否准确贴切地使用有情有义、亦真亦诚的过渡性词汇是高考书面表达能否获得高分的关键。本文从不同体裁的角度谈谈书面表达过渡性词汇的使用方法。

一、记叙文如何使用过渡性词汇

众所周知,记叙文往往以时间变化、地点变换为叙述线索,因此记叙文过渡性词汇的使用也呈现出明显的时间性和地点性,请看下表:

即学即用:阅读下面一则学生习作,请选择适当的过渡性词汇填空

根据图示,写一篇短文。要求故事完整,语句通顺,内容与图片相符。

提示:图中学生名叫林峰字数:100左右

just at this time,one morning,then,finally,suddenly

__1__Lin Feng saw a blind man walking across the street on his way to school.

__2__a car was going to hit him.__3__, Lin Feng ran up to him and pulled him back. The man was saved.__4__Lin Feng took him to the other side of the street. The man thanked him for his help. But Lin Feng didnt wait for his thanks. He went to school at once. It was late and the first class had been on.

The teacher was very angry, so Lin Feng told him what had happened.__5__the teacher was satisfied with him. “Youve done a good deed,” said the teacher with a smile on his face.

1. One morning2. Suddenly3. Just at this time4. Then5. Finally

二、现象评论文如何使用过渡性词汇

现象评论文往往介绍人们对某一社会现象褒贬不一的看法以及写作者自己的观点,因此过渡性词汇的使用随着写作内容的不同而有所变化,请看下表:

即学即用:阅读下面一则学生习作,请选择适当的过渡性词汇填空

最近甘肃一位28岁的女子因疯狂追星迫使父亲自杀,这件事在广大青少年中引起了强烈反响,人们对追星发表了不同的看法。阅读下表内容,写一篇短文介绍这些看法,并发表自己的观点。

字数:120左右参考词汇:追星be obsessed with stars

as a result,at the same time,in the opinion of me,however,as you can imagine

Recently, in Gansu Province, a 28-year-old womans father killed himself because of her being obsessed with stars, which arouse teens heated discussion.__1__, different students have different opinions about it.

Some think it is very normal to like stars, which can make teens better understand stars and learn from them to develop faster.

__2__, some think that those obsessed with stars are usually lost in their crazy actions and cant get rid of them.__3__, much time and money is wasted and even a happy family will be destroyed. __4__, it is normal to like a star but we cant go too far. We shouldnt let our actions influence our study and life. We cant copy stars in everything, and__5__we should develop an independent personality.

1. As you can imagine2. However3. As a result 4. In the opinion of me5. what is more important

三、问题介绍文如何使用过渡性词汇

问题介绍文往往介绍问题产生的原因、结果及解决问题的建议,因此过渡性词汇的使用随着这些内容的变化而有所不同,请看下表:

即学即用:阅读下面一则学生习作,请选择适当的过渡性词汇填空

目前中学生烟民越来越多,阅读下表内容,写一篇短文介绍这一现象并发表自己的看法,提出解决问题的方法。

first,as we laa know,in my opinion,at the same time,besides,as you can imagine,whtat's worse,as a result of

Now, more and more students are learning to smoke, and there are many reasons for it.

__1__, middle school students always have strong pressure from study and__2__this, many learn to smoke to release their pressure.__3__, many students learn from stars to smoke so that they can show their unique style.

It is know to all that smoking does great harm to us.__4__ , smoking is bad to our health and often causes fatal illnesses. In the meanwhile, smoking costs us much money and increases the load of our life.__5__, smoking often causes big fires, which usually lead to a great loss.

__6__, smoking is really a bad thing. We should realize the harm of it and try to get rid of the habit.__7__, we should form other good habits.

If so, we can get rid of the bad habit of smoking.

1. As we all know2. as a result of3. At the same time4. First5. Whats worse6. In my opinion7. Besides

四、数据式图表作文如何使用过渡性词汇

数据式图表作文往往是通过数据介绍来说明道理的,因此其过渡性词汇的使用随着语境逻辑的变化而有所不同,请看下表:

即学即用:阅读下面一则学生习作,请选择适当的过渡性词汇填空

根据下面图表,以“Fire Causes”为标题,写一篇议论文,要点包括:火灾原因,各类火灾的比例,火灾给人们的启示。

2006年某市火灾事故发生原因图表(graph)

of course,as we laa know,at the same time,therefore,as you can imagine

Fire Causes

__1__, fire, one of the most terrible killers in our modern society can be caused by many factors.__2__, it is mainly caused by smokers, as can be seen from the graph. In 2006, thousands of fires happened in the city. About 50% of them were caused by smokers who left cigarette-ends everywhere. 30% were caused by defective insulation and 20% by children playing with matches. No matter what type of fire it was, there was one thing in common: carelessness.__3__we should warn children of the dangers of playing with matches.__4__, workers should know the importance of good insulation to peoples lives.__5__smoking should not be allowed in public places.

1. As we all know2. As you can imagine3. Therefore4. At the same time5. Of course

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