短文改错专项训练

河北 郭鹏举

短文改错专项训练

河北 郭鹏举

Passage 1

Dear Roshan，

So now your company had finally realized your real worth by promoting you to the post of Sales Manager. It was really an huge joy to know about your promotion，which you rightly deserved it. I feel as if I myself has been promoted. I am really proud of you as might be your another friends and relatives.

Let me to send my heartiest congratulations on this happy occasion. I feel confidence that you are going to be a big gun on your new post. It also means greater responsibilities and increasing burden. I know you like challenging jobs and this promotion provides you the thrill of challenges. Please write to me as to what you feel on this advancement in your career.

With best wishes for more such promotions and successes.

Yours sincerely

Caroline

Passage 2

My dear Tom，

I hope you are doing well at Simla in these summer days. You had not written to me about your examinations. I hope you have fared well in all subject.

Anyway my sister Usha’s wedding will take the place on March 13th，2005. The news may surprise you for its suddenness. I did not inform you with the marriage in my last letter writing to you. The idea was that I should detract your attention from your studies.

You are cordially invite to attend the wedding. My parents will be too glad to see you here but they would appreciate your helping hand.

I would very much appreciate if you could manage to reach here immediate after your examinations.

Yours sincerely

Jack

【参考答案与解析】

Passage 1

【文章出处】http：//diplateevo.com/

【New words】a big gun 大人物，一把好手

1. 第一句中的had改为has。考查动词时态。根据句中的时间状语“now”可知，本句强调对现在的影响，故应用现在完成时态。

2. 第二句中的an改为a。考查冠词。huge的第一个字母为辅音，故将an改为a。

3. 删除第二句中的第二个it。考查代词。“which you rightly deserved”是定语从句，deserved的宾语是关系代词which。所以，it是多余的。

4. 第三句中的has改为have。考查主谓一致。从句主语是“I”，是第一人称而非第三人称，故不用第三人称单数形式。

5. 第四句中的another改为other。考查代词。another修饰单数可数名词，other修饰可数名词的复数形式。根据本句中的“friends and relatives”可以判断，应该用other。

6. 删除第五句中的to。考查动词不定式。“let sb. do”是固定搭配，是省去to的不定式。

7. 第六句中的confidence改为confident。考查词性变换。本句中的“feel”是系动词，需要用形容词作表语。

8. 第七句中的increasing改为increased。考查非谓语动词。increasing意为“正在增长的，日益增加的”；increased意为“增加了的，增长了的”。职位的提升意味着加重了担子，而不是日益增加的担子。

9. 第八句中的you与the之间加with。考查介词。provide后面不可以跟双宾语，其用法是：“provide sb. with sth.”或者是“provide sth. for sb.”。

10. 第九句中的what改为how。考查连接副词。what在名词性从句中一般作主语或宾语，但是在本从句中，既不缺少主语，也不缺少宾语（feel在此是不及物动词），其句意为：对于你职务的提升这件事，你感受如何？请写信给我。故将what改为how。

Passage 2

【文章出处】学生习作

【New Words】fare vi. 进展，detract vt.使分心cordially adv.真诚地

1. 第二句中的had改为have。考查动词时态。强调到现在为止，没有给我写过信。所以应用现在完成时态。……