My School

2016-05-14 14:05
中学生英语·阅读与写作 2016年9期
关键词:赣榆县定冠词优点

【栏目要求】

1. 将学生习作根据中考分值给出成绩; 2. 在应该修改的地方划线并标注序号;

3. 根据所标序号进行修改并说明修改的理由; 4. 给学生习作点评<优点与不足>;

5. 请点评名师提供简历一份,包括:学校、职务、 职称、荣誉、教研教学成果、照片一张。

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My school is very beautiful. There are lots of beautiful flowers and trees in my school but① it is always clean and tidy.

There is a big playground in my school. We have P.E. classes on the playground and we often do sports there. Our teaching building has five floors. My classroom is on the fifth floor. It is big and clean. The computer rooms are on the third floor. There is a big library on the second floor. There are many books in the library. I often read books there. There are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too. The teachers in our school are very kind. The students are very polite and clever.

I love my school, because its my the② second home.

江苏省赣榆县罗阳中学七(5)班 吴甜甜

点评

1. 优点:

小作者首先向我们介绍了她所在学校的整体环境,然后又介绍了操场及教学楼的分布情况,最后点明学校是自己另一个家。文章用词得当,条理清晰,是一篇优秀的学生习作。

2. 需要修改的地方:

① but改为and。由上下文可知,前后是并列关系;

② the去掉。序数词前有形容词性物主代词修饰时,不要加定冠词the。

3. 评分:

按江苏省连云港市中考英语作文满分20分的评分标准,本文修改前可得18分。

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