高考英语问题解决型书面表达题导写

2017-04-21 10:05陈广乙
广东教育·高中 2017年4期
关键词:词数课堂练习作弊

陈广乙

一、文体概述

问题解决型作文要求考生对生活中的某个问题简要描述并提出解决方法。其常见形式是:一、目前存在某个问题;二、这种问题的危害或产生原因;三、给出解决方法。此类作文的重点在于如何解决问题,占文章的1/3至1/2的篇幅。

二、必备短语

1. with the rapid development of ... 随着……的快速发展

2. it is of great importance for us to... 我们十分必要去做某事

3. take some measures to solve this problem采取措施解决问题

4. more problems are brought to our attention 我们关注到很多问题

5. spare no effort to solve this problem 不遗余力解决这个问题

6. cope with the situation 处理这个局面

7. take ones advice听取某人的建议

8. it is high time that we did sth 是我们做某事的时候了

9. take sth. into consideration 将某事纳入考虑

10. there is still a long way for us to do sth要做到某事,我们还有很长的路走

三、套用句式

1. Recently, environmental pollution has been brought into public attention. 最近环境污染已经成为人们关注的焦点。

2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem of cheating. 现在越来越多的人开始关注作弊问题。

3. There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon. 有很多原因导致这个现象发生。

4. It is high time that effective measures were taken to cope with this situation. 為了处理好局势,我们有必要采取有效的措施。

5. Peoples awareness of environmental protection should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken. 我们要提升人们的环保意识以及采取恰当的措施。

四、习作修改 下列习作中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

Nowadays, cars have caused a lot of serious problems in our world, that take us a lot of efforts to solve them. All the time, they are pumping plenty of waste gases into the atmosphere, cause diseases and even deaths. One possible solution is to design and develop clean cars and clean fuels. Because it may take decades for the new models to complete replace the traditional ones. Other solution is to develop modern public transportation systems and limit the use of private car. On whole, the solution to air pollution need the cooperation from the government and the public. This problem can be solved only by the help of science and technology.

五、课堂练习

假设你是某国际学校的学生李华,你发现近来学校考试存在作弊问题,请你给校长Mr. Johnson写一封信反映情况,要点如下:

1. 目前考试作弊的现象普遍, 对教学造成严重危害;

2. 校方应该怎么做。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好。

提示:出勤率class attendance

Dear Mr.Johnson,

I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school.

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

六、课外作业

假设你是某国际学校的学生李华,你发现考生的宿舍生活存在问题,请你给校长Mr. Johnson写一封信反映情况,要点如下:

1. 宿舍中时常会有不和谐现象,对学习生活影响较大;

2. 如何创造和谐宿舍生活。

注意:

1. 词数100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好。

提示:和谐的 harmonious

Dear Johnson,

I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school.

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________

Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

参考答案与范文

习作修改

本篇讲的是因为汽车数量的增多,导致了许多问题。就此作者提出了两个解决办法,并认为科技是解决问题的好办法。

1. that→which引导非限制性定语从句,替代前面的先行词problems,用which。

2. 划去solve后的them因不定式的宾语就是句子的主语时,不定式后不再用宾语。

3. cause→causing 此处为非谓语动词当结果状语,用现在分词。

4. Because→But 上文提到一种解决办法,下文写到需要几十年的时间,形成转折关系,用but。

5. complete→completely 修饰动词replace用副词。

6. other→another 对应上文提到的one solution,这里提出另一个解决办法,用another。

7. car→cars 限制私家车的使用,car为可数名词,应用其复数形式。

8.在on和whole中间加the 因on the whole为固定词组,意为“大体上,就全体而论”。

9. need→needs 因主语solution为单数,谓语动词需要用第三人称单数形式。

10. by→with 表示“在……的帮助下”,用with the help of...。

课堂练习

Dear Mr. Johnson ,

I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school. Nowadays cheating in exams is becoming more and more common in our school. This phenomenon will do harm to the teaching and learning quality. As a result, we must put an end to this trend as soon as possible.

As for solutions, many a way can be adopted to cope with the cheating phenomenon. First of all, our school should call on every student to fight against cheating and report it to teachers if they saw someone cheating and they should be protected. In addition, teachers should help students form the right attitude towards exam results. Lastly, strict punishment should be given to those caught cheating. Only by doing these can this problem be solved quickly.

Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

課外作业

Dear Johnson,

I am writing to share my views on a phenomenon in our school. Recently, the harmony in the dormitory of our campus is easily disturbed. We saw fights and quarrels over very tiny little things, which was absolutely unacceptable.

As we know, dormitory life is an essential part of our high school life. So we must take measures immediately to bring back harmony in the dorm.

There are several ways to achieve our aim. Firstly, teachers should help students understand that harmony in our school life has a huge effect on our study. Secondly, students should be educated to respect others living patterns and get rid of improper living habits, if there are any. Thirdly, when disagreements appear, students should turn to teachers for help instead of solving them themselves.

Thanks for your time and I hope this could be dealt with soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

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