高考英语观点对比型书面表达题导写

肖世奇

一、文体概述

观点对比型的文章属于议论文，其特点是以社会热议的话题为背景，发表议论，并要求考生对此发表自己的观点。一般内容要点为提出问题、分析问题原因、发表自己的观点。写作中要注意观点明确，理由充分，多用一般现在时。

二、必备短语

1. ...have a heated discussion about... ……对……进行一场激烈的讨论

2. ...has aroused wide public concern ……引起人们的广泛关注

3. a popular topic一个热门话题

4. in my opinion /in my view在我看来，我认为；as far as Im concerned对我而言

5. according to sb根据某人的看法

6. from ones point of view/from ones perspective在某人看来

7. ...vary /differ from person to person ……因人而异

8. be in favour of /agree with 同意

9. in contrast/on the contrary与此相反

10. be opposed to /be against /disapprove of反对

三、套用句式

1. sb. believe/ think/ claim that 某人认为

2. People have taken /adopted different attitudes towards... 人们对……有不同的态度。

3. For my part， the former is surely a wise choice. 依我之见，前者是一个明智的选择。

4. Every coin has two sides， so does .... 凡事都有两面性，……也是如此。

5. The reason why I agree with the second idea is that... 我同意第二種观点的理由是......

四、习作修改 下列习作中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

Nowadays， many people like to use Web Language in writing and communication. Some even speak Chinese mixed with some English word， so our class held a discussion about if we should use it.

Some students hold the view which it is ridiculous and hard to understand it. Using web language not only has bad effects on learning English， but also make the Chinese language less standard and pure. Besides， others in favour of using it for the reason that it is simple， convenient and helpful in expressing themselves. Whats more， it makes the language more interested.

On my opinion， its not a good habit to use the Web Language. It may make ourselves misunderstand.

五、课堂练习

网上聊天成了人们关注的话题。请就此话题写一篇英语短文，投给某英语报，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。

1. 赞成：广交朋友，与不同人交流，增长见识。

2. 反对：易沉迷网络，易被骗。

3. 你的看法。

注意：1. 词数为100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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六、课外作业

诚信是一种美德。你的一位同学说“Honesty is the best policy”，引起了同学们的讨论，请用英语将讨论写成一篇短文，投给某英文报。内容要点：

1. 有的同学认为有时不能老实，不然吃亏；

2. 有的同学不同意这个观点，认为是我们的传统美德；

3. 谈谈你的看法及说明理由。

注意：1. 词数为100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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參考答案

习作修改

本文讨论的是使用网络语言是否可行。作者阐述了班级正反双方的意见，同时表达了自己的观点。

1. word→words“夹杂着英语单词”，word是可数的，要用复数形式。

2. if→whether 在介词后接宾语从句，表示“是否”用whether不用if。

3. which→that 同位语从句，当从句的结构和意义完整时，用that引导。

4. 删去第二个it 同位语从句的主语it指Chinese with English words，它也是不定式to understand的逻辑宾语，故该不定式后不再用宾语了，删去it。

5. make→makes 句子主语是Using web language，谓语动词make需要加s。

6. Besides→However 下文是表达相反的观点，需要用However表示转折。

7. others和in之间加are 句子缺少谓语，主语为others复数，添加are。

8. interested→interesting 它使得语言更加有趣，不是指人的感受，应该用interesting。

9. On→In 因in my opinion是固定搭配。

10. misunderstand →misunderstood 作者认为用网络语言不是好习惯，因此它可能带来的后果是使得自己“被误解”，用misunderstood。

课堂练习

Chatting on line， a popular topic， has aroused wide public concern recently.

Some agree to chat on line for the reason that it helps them make friends conveniently. Whats more， students can communicate with different people so that they can widen their horizons. Others， however， disagree with it. They think students are easily addicted to the Internet， wasting their precious time and distracting them from their study. Besides， some students get cheated on line.

From my perspective， students should place their study， health and safety before other things. As for friendship， we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us and we should focus more energy on our study.

课外作业

One of my classmates come up with a wisdom， which goes like this：“Honesty is the best policy.”It brings about a heated discussion.

Some students prefer to be dishonest sometimes for they think being honest is a kind of foolishness to some certain. In addition， they will suffer from loss if they are not clever enough. On the contrary， others are in favour of the wisdom. They are convinced that honesty is a traditional virtue of Chinese people. Consequently， everyone should regard it a rule and voluntarily observe it.

As for me， I cant agree more with the wisdom. I have been keeping it as my motto， as I firmly believe that it will bring me fortune and happiness in my life.

责任编辑 蒋小青