高考英语全国卷中招领启事写作导练

2017-04-21 10:16符曼静
广东教育·高中 2017年4期
关键词:失物招领手提包有效期

符曼静

一、文体概述

招领启事是拾到物品的个人或集体,用书面形式请失主前来认领时使用的一种应用文。其内容包括:

1. 在正文上方居中写Found;

2. 拾到的时间、地点;

3. 拾到物品的特征;

4. 表明寻找主人的意图;

5. 提供联系方式或地址;

6. 該启事的有效时间。

拾到者执笔写的启事需用第一人称,反之用第三人称。另外,拾到的物品时间用一般过去时,物品的特征等内容则一般用一般现在时。

二、必备短语

1. a shopping bag 购物袋

2. a make-up bag 化妆品提包

3. claim it directly 直接认领

4. period of validity? 有效期

5. the deadline for ……的截止日期

6. be available 有空

7. undertake the responsibility 承担责任

8. the consultation service 咨询处

9. email me at发邮件给我到……

10. call me at拨打……联系我

三、套用句式

1. Exactly speaking/To be exact, the purse is made of canvas and inside of it there is a picture, a bunch of keys and some money. 具体地说,钱包是用帆布做的,里面有一张相片、一串钥匙和一些钱。

2. I am eager to find out the owner as soon as possible, so if you are the very one I am looking for, please call me at 13711211567。我急切地想要尽快找到物主,因此如果你就是我要找的人,请拨打13711211567与我联系。

3. Or you can also contact me by emailing me at Tom@126.com. 或者你可以通过发邮件到Tom@126.com来联系我。

4. The owner is expected to call us at 0755-2727992 or come to the consultation service in our railway station to claim it directly. 期望物主能拨打0755-2727992与我们联系,或者来火车站的咨询处直接认领。

5. I would like to remind you that I will keep it until July 20. 我想要提醒你,我将会保管它直到7月20日。

四、习作修改 下列习作中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

Found

At 8 a.m. January 5, 2017, I find a white Puma coat in our schools reading room when I was reading there. Exact speaking, the coat is made of cotton and inside of it there are a purse, and a membership cards of a bookshop. I am eager to find out the owner as soon as possible, though if you are the very one I am looking for, please call myself at 13077859965 at 1:00 p.m. or after 9:00 p.m. every day. Or you can also contacted me by the emailing me at LH@163.com. Last but not least, I would like to remind you what I will keep it until January 29.

Xinan Middle School

Li Hua

五、课堂练习

假如你是高二(4)班的李华,你在食堂吃饭时,捡到了一个书包。现请你根据以下内容写一则失物招领启事。要点如下:

1. 拾到的时间、地点;

2. 书包的特征与书包里的若干物品;

3.表明寻找主人的意图;

4.你的联系方式与该启示的有效期。

注意: 1. 词数 100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

六、课外作业

北京火车站的一位工作人员,在安检处捡到了一个女生手提包,请根据以下内容替北京火车站写一则失物招领启事。

要点如下:

1. 拾到的时间、地点;

2. 手提包的品牌、颜色与面料;

3. 手提包里的若干物品;

4. 联系方式与该启示的有效期。

注意: 1. 词数 100左右; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考答案与范文

习作修改

李华写了一则失物招领启事,内容包括了捡到失物的时间、地点、大衣的特征,他的联系方式与该启事的有效期等。

1. 在January 前加on 具体日期前应用介词on。

2. find→found 有具体的过去时间应用一般过去时。

3. Exact→Exactly 修饰分词speaking用副词。

4. are→is 因there be句式后跟的是a purse,因此be用单数形式is。

5. cards→card 里面有一张书店的会员卡,前面已出现a,名词card应用单数。

6. though→so 前后两句是因果关系,用连词so。

7. myself→me 请给我打电话,不是给我自己打电话,充当call宾语用me。

8. contacted→contact 在情态动词后用动词原形。

9. 删去by the emailing 中的the 因通过做某事用by doing sth即可。

10. what→that 因名词性从句内容完整不缺少成分,用that连接。

课堂练习

Found

At about 12 am on January 9, 2017, I found a blue Nike schoolbag in our canteen when I was having lunch there. To be specific, the bag is made of canvas, inside of which you can find an mp3, an exercise book of English listening and speaking as well as a bunch of keys. I hope to find out the owner as soon as possible, so if you are the very one I am looking for, please call me at 13677853266. I will be available at 13:00 am or after 10:00 pm every day. Last but not least, I would like to remind you that the deadline for my keeping it is before January 29.

Class 4, Senior 2

Li Hua

课外作业

Found

At 21:00 on January 2, 2017, a staff of our railway station found a handbag at the security check. To be exact, it is a red woman handbag made of fur, whose brand is Coach. Inside the handbag, there is a railway ticket from Beijing to Shenzhen, an ID card and some cash. The owner is expected to call us at 010-67542386 or come to the consultation service in our railway station to claim it directly. Last but not least, we would like to remind you that you have to undertake the responsibility after one and a half months.

Beijing Railway Station

責任编辑 蒋小青

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