话题作文
——通讯与科技①

吉林 王天宝

□话题概述

介绍现代通讯工具、科技发明以及信息利用（如手机、微信、QQ、互联网等），描述现代通讯工具给人们生活带来的方便，展现科技发展与社会进步的紧密联系，鼓励同学们将现代通讯工具作为学习和生活的必需品，提高学习效率，并树立远大志向，肩负起未来科技发展的重任。

该话题的写作体裁多以说明文、议论文为主，有时也会使用记叙文等。

★佳作赏评

The Internet in our life

The Internet plays a very important role in everybody's life.It has made a huge difference to the world.Nowadays we can do many things on the Internet.

On the Internet we can get as much information as we need.We can read news from all over the world in the shortest time.It also serves us the newest movies and songs.Whatever the programs you like best are,you can watch them online at the same time.Don’t be afraid of having no time to buy clothes.Taobao is the best choice for you.You can also buy anything you want there.If you want to travel,you can buy tickets online without leaving home as well.Sometimes you could get the cheapest ones.For the teenagers like us,studying online is a good way to improve ourselves.We can get more knowledge on the Internet.And if we have trouble in some subjects,we can learn by watching the videos online for help.

The Internet is everywhere in our life.It makes us do things more quickly and more easily.We should learn better on the Internet,and try to make our life better and better in the future.

【权威点评】这是一篇介绍互联网的说明文。作者以“总—分—总”的结构，从互联网的重要地位、给人们生活带来的便利，以及促进学习三个层次进行科学合理的谋篇布局。

文章从正面列举了互联网带给人们的诸多方便，又侧重谈论互联网对学生学习的帮助，贴近学生生活，并且对学生有正确的引导作用，使之借助有利条件努力学习，立志成长，深化主题。

文章通过as...as,in the shortest time,you like best,at the same time,better and better等词组和Don’t be afraid of...等句型，更鲜明地点出了互联网与人类生活的密切关系，及其给人们带来的方便和益处。

★思路点拨

通讯与科技类的英语作文经常以“内容引入—细节描述—概括总结”的结构形式进行构思成文，作文的标题比较灵活，一般没有固定的模式。

这类话题的作文经常采用一般现在时态，人称多为第一人称或第二人称；谈论现代通讯工具对生活的影响时，往往以现在完成时态为主；介绍现代通讯工具在人们生活中的运用，则以一般现在时为主，叙述时人称以第一人称为主，假设时一般使用第二人称。

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