My habits

安徽省宣城市第八中学九年级（1）班 王兴宇

Hello,mynameis Wang Xingyu.I’m a middle schoolstudent. I’m seventeen years old and a naughtyboywho is more than 1.8 meters tall.

I always go to bed early and get up early to read books.It can not only make me feel peaceful and relaxed,but also open up my eyes.I am also a hard-working boy and I often help my parents with housework as possible as I can.What’s more,I like to take part in some activities,such as swimming,dancing and traveling.

However,I also have some bad habits.I usually eat junk food instead of fruit and vegetables.So I’m becoming more and more fat.Another bad habit for me is that I always spend a lot of time watching TV in my spare time.

These are my habits.I’ll develop my good habits and give up the bad ones,and I’m sure I’ll become happier and healthier.

【教师点评】

这是一篇介绍个人习惯的习作。全文主题突出，结构合理，详略得当。however,as possible as I can,what’s more等词语及定语从句、宾语从句等的运用，增加了文章的文采。但如能将第三段中的more and more fat改为fatter and fatter，则表达会更加恰当。