教你如何写“人物与故事”书面表达

张新峰

人物与故事类的文章属于记叙文，记叙文是考生需要掌握的最基本的文体，也是中考命题的热点所在。此话题主要从以下四个方面进行设题：

1. 自我介绍，如自己的情况、成长变化等;

2. 介绍他人，如老师、朋友、影视或文学作品中的人物等;

3. 我和他人之间的故事，如同学之间解决矛盾的故事;

4. 讲述一个故事，如历史故事、成语故事等。

一、典型例题剖析

假定你是李磊，依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为“Im Proud of My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家庭故事。

要点提示：1. 家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作;2. 邻里和睦，礼貌待人;3. 爱护环境，从我做起。

参考词汇：work hard; be friendly to each other; get on well with; protect the environment;  be volunteers

【教你审题】

仔细审读所给文字提示，可以提取以下信息：

1. 主题：Im Proud of My Family

2. 体裁：记叙文。

3. 人称：第一人称。

4. 时态：一般现在时。

5. 建议分三段来写：第一段引出主题Im Proud of My Family。第二段主要从家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作;邻里和睦，礼貌待人;爱护环境，从我做起，这三个方面去介绍。第三段作总结。

【素材积累】

提分短语

work hard 努力工作;be kind and friendly to sb. 对某人友好;get on well with sb. 與某人相处友好;each other 彼此;try ones best to do sth. 尽力做某事;protect the environment 保护环境;be used to doing sth. 习惯于做某事;be glad to do sth.乐于做某事;at any time 在任何时候;in poor areas 在贫困地区;be proud of 以……为傲

提分句子

开篇句：

I have a happy family. 我有一个幸福的家庭。

结尾句：

What a happy family！ Im proud of my family！ 多么幸福的家庭啊！我为我的家庭感到骄傲！

点睛句：

We get on well with each other. 我们彼此相处得很好。

My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. 我的家人很乐意在任何时候做志愿者。

Helping others is a virtue. 助人为乐是一种美德。

As long as everyone gives a love the world will become a better world. 赠人玫瑰，手有余香。

A harmonious life is a kind of happiness. 和睦的生活就是一种幸福。

【写作模板】

【佳作赏析】

[Im Proud of My Family

My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family： my parents， my sister and I.

My family love each other. ① My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school， too.  ② My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. ③ We get on well with each other. ④ My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. ⑤ My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food.⑥ My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. My sister helps in the school library twice a week. Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.

⑦ What a happy family！ Im proud of my family！ ① work hard努力工作。

② be kind and friendly to sb. 对某人友好。

③ get on well with each other 和睦相处。

④ try ones best to do sth. 尽力做某事;protect the environment 保护环境。