演讲稿写作

山东 李全忠

❖写作指导

（一）文体概述

演讲稿是一种常见的应用文文体，作者就某一个具体的问题发表自己的见解和主张，阐明事理或抒发情感。在组织演讲稿时，为获得应有的表达效果，作者要注意演讲面向的对象，注意措辞及修辞性语言的合理使用。

（二）写作框架

（三）修辞运用

________e.g.Have_you_ever_faced_a_time_when_everything_looked_dark_and_you_had_no_hope_at_all?________e.g.As_John_A.Logan_said,“Music_is_the_medicine_of_the_mind.”e.g.Music gives me happiness.Music gives me hope and satisfaction.Music gives me strength and brings me relief.________e.g.Music_has_become_one_of_my_best_friends.________e.g.It_makes_my_spirits_fly_like_a_kite_in_the_wind.________e.g.It_was_the_rock_I_leant_on_to_become_strong_and_to_get_through_those_hard_times.设问______________________________________________________________引用_____________________________________________________________________排比拟人________________________________________________________________________明喻____________________________________________________________________暗喻______________________________________________________________

（四）写作模板

Good morning,everyone！

It's so nice to see all of you here.I feel honored to have the opportunity to give/make/deliver a speech on/about...(打招呼/引出话题)

Here are some reasons.First of all, _____.Besides, _____.Last but not least, _____./To begin with, _____.Secondly, _____.What's more, _____.As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, _____.(提出论题，论证观点)

From what have been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that _____.(总结演讲内容，得出结论)

Thanks for your attention.(表示感谢)

（五）素材积累

开篇

1.Good morning, everybody! My name is Li Hua.It is my honour to speak here.Today,I'd like to talk about...大家早上好！我是李华。在这里发言是我的荣幸。今天，我想谈谈……

2.It's my great honour to have this chance to deliver my speech on...我很荣幸能有这个机会就……发表演讲。

3.Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to deliver my speech.由衷地感谢你们给我这个发表演讲的机会。

4.I am going to talk about something that is vitally important to all of us.The topic of my speech today is...我要谈一些对我们所有人都至关重要的事情。我今天演讲的主题是……

正文

1.Have you ever gone through a time when things didn't go well and you almost lost heart?你是否经历过事情不顺利，你几乎失去信心的时候？

2.Two weeks ago, I was told I had a serious disease which was difficult to cure.两周前，我被告知我得了一种很难治愈的严重疾病。

3.It was music that gave me encouragement and happiness.是音乐给了我鼓励和快乐。

4.As far as I'm concerned,music is sunshine in my heart.在我看来，音乐是我心中的阳光。

5.The song made me feel much better and I began to listen to music all the time from then on.那首歌让我感觉好多了，从那时起我开始一直听音乐。

6.Music helped me recover.音乐帮助我康复。

7.It is time for us to enjoy music in our spare time.是我们在业余时间享受音乐的时候了。

结尾

1.Actions speak louder than words.Let's take action immediately.事实胜于雄辩。让我们立即采取行动。

2.I hope all of you will begin to treasure music and make it a part of your life.我希望你们所有人都能开始珍视音乐，让它成为你们生活的一部分。

3.Last but not least，it's everyone's responsibility to...最后但同样重要的是，……是每个人的责任。

4.During those hard times, music can help you in the same way that it helped me.在那些艰难的时期，音乐可以像帮助我一样帮助你。

5.Thank you for your attention.I hope you will find what I said helpful/useful/practical.感谢你的关注。希望我所说的对你有帮助/有用/实用。

语篇衔接

two years ago 两年前

and thus 因此

then one day 后来有一天

so...that...如此……以至于……

from then on 从此之后

in one's opinion 在某人看来

It's obvious that...显然……

It's no wonder that...难怪……

so far 迄今为止

There is no denying that...不可否认……

There is no doubt that...毫无疑问……

to be frank 坦率地说

to be honest 说实话；老实说

to sum up 总之

according to 根据

as a consequence 结果

due to/owing to/thanks to 由于

in terms of 就……方面来说

above all 最重要的是

in addition(to)此外(还)

the former...the latter...前者……后者……

to start with 首先

what's more 更重要的是

whether...or not/or...无论……与否/还是……

as a matter of fact 事实上

despite the fact that...尽管……这一事实

on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……

for example/for instance 例如

in particular 尤其；特别

❖情境呈现

假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部近期将举行主题为“Benefits of music”的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。

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【佳作欣赏】

Hello！My name is Li Hua,and I feel it a great honor to share my views on the benefits of music.

Have you ever gone through some periods when you feel very depressed? Two years ago, my best friend was killed in a traffic accident.Realizing that she was gone forever made me so sad that I felt I was surrounded by the ocean of sadness.I did not know how to face my life.

Then one day, I accidentally heard a piece of classical music by Eric Clapton calledTears in Heaven, which touched my heart and moved me to tears.From then on, I began to listen to music because I realized music is the language of the mind.Just as Hans Christian Andersen once said,“Where words fail, music speaks.”Music can truly describe what we are feeling deep inside.

Music helps me remember how much I miss my friend.Music helps me remember all the great times we had and gives me a sense of satisfaction.Music also helps me be grateful for that time together.Moreover,music eventually helps me survive those hard times.If you struggle to face the cruel reality, music can be your guide and friend.So let's treasure the expressive power of music!

Thank you!

❖即时训练

你所在的班级即将举行主题为“The power of music”的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。

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