莱昂内尔·梅西

张湾湾

Lionel Messi

Born on June 24， 1987， Lionel Messi is a famous soccer player from Argentina who plays for Paris Saint?German F.C. （巴黎圣日耳曼足球俱乐部） now.

Growing up， Messi had two older brothers with whom he played soccer. At the age of eight， Messi joined the Newells Old Boys soccer club in his town. Unfortunately， three years later he was diagnosed with a condition that stunted his growth and was prescribed medication to help. Luckily， when Messi was 13 years old， he was offered a position on the La Masia team. This was an academy for young soccer players. The academy also offered to pay for his medication. With that， Messi and his family moved to Barcelona and Messi started playing for the academy. Messi became the youngest player to score a goal for FC Barcelona when he was 16. From there， Messi continued to improve his skills. In 2009， Messi contributed greatly to his team winning three European club titles， all in the same season. In that season alone， Messi miraculously scored 38 goals in 51 matches. 2012 was a fantastic year for Messi. In March， he incredibly scored 5 goals in a Champions League game and was the first player in the game to do this. A short time later， he exceeded César Rodríguezs record of 232 goals， which gave Messi the title of Barcelonas all?time top scorer （最佳射手）. By this time， Messi had won world player of the year four times. On December 18， 2022， Lionel Messi finally achieved his FIFA World Cup dream as Argentina won their third crown on penalties following one of the greatest finals in the tournaments history at Lusail Stadium.

Apart from football， Messi has also been involved with a number of charities. He set up his own organization in order to help children who need special care or are at risk. Messi also represents a charity called UNICEF which helps children across the world.

Messi has demonstrated multiple times that he does possess qualities that make him a great footballer. He is a paragon （楷模） for the rest to follow， ready to defend his teammates and there to offer a helping hand when they need to be lifted.

Activity A Reading for understanding

Ⅰ. Text?centered chunks

be diagnosed with 被诊断为

continue to do 继续做

contribute to 为……做贡献

achieve ones dream 实现某人的梦想

apart from 除……之外（还）

be involved with 涉及；与……有关联

set up 建立

at risk 处于危险中

Ⅱ. Text?centered sentences

1. 限制性定语从句

Born on June 24， 1987， Lionel Messi is a famous soccer player from Argentina who plays for Paris Saint?German F.C. now. 莱昂内尔·梅西出生于1987年6月24日，是一名来自阿根廷的著名足球运动员，现效力于巴黎圣日耳曼足球俱乐部。

【点石成金】本句中，who引导的是一个定语从句，先行词为soccer player，who在定语从句中作主语。

【运用迁移】阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦，也许是现代物理学中最伟大的科学家，通常被认为是有史以来最聪明的人之一。

2. 非谓语动词

In 2009， Messi contributed greatly to his team winning three European club titles， all in the same season. 2009年，梅西为他的球队在同一个赛季赢得三个欧洲俱乐部冠军做出了巨大贡献。

【点石成金】本句中，winning 为非谓语动词，与主语Messi是逻辑上的主动关系，所以用动词?ing形式作伴随状语。

【运用迁移】众所周知，他把所有的时间和精力都投入到建筑中，为现代建筑的发展做出了巨大貢献。

3. 非限制性定语从句

A short time later， he exceeded César Rodríguezs record of 232 goals，which gave Messi the title of Barcelonas all?time top scorer. 不久之后，他就超过了塞萨尔·罗德里格斯232球的纪录，这让梅西获得了巴塞罗那历史最佳射手的称号。

【点石成金】本句中，which 引导的是一个非限制性定语从句，指代he exceeded César Rodríguezs record of 232 goals，在定语从句中作主语。

【运用迁移】居里夫人一生致力于科学研究，并于1903年和1911年分别获得诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖，成为世界上第一位两次获得诺贝尔奖的科学家。

Activity B Reading for writing

假定你是李华，最近你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以“The person I admire most”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿。

1. 你最敬佩的人物是谁；

2. 人物的主要故事及取得的成就；

3. 人物评价或影响。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 需要使用定语从句和非谓语动词的结构；

4. 注意段落内的逻辑关系。

The person I admire most

Honorable judges， distinguished guests， ladies and gentlemen，I feel really honored to stand here and deliver a speech.

Thats all. Thank you！

写作导引

本次的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿，要求学生介绍自己最敬佩的人，包括人物经历、所取得的成就和优秀品质，并且需要使用定语从句和非谓语动词的结构。这些写作要求与所给语篇的主题语境紧密相关。我们可以通过整合同主题阅读材料的内容和语言，梳理写作思路和积累素材。

一、语篇解码

（一）主题归纳

What is the text mainly about？

（二）结构梳理与内容分析

Fill in the blanks according to the text.

[Birth][Career and charity

work][Evaluation][Lionel Messi][Born on June 24， 1987， Messi is

1.                                .][On December 18， 2022， Messi finally

2.                                .][Apart from football， Messi has also been involved with a number of 3.                                .][Messi possesses qualities that make him a great

4.                                .]

二、素材积累

本文是基于同一主题的阅读和写作，我们可以通过学习、模仿并运用阅读中的语言表达，如词块和句型，积累写作的语言素材。

（一）引出人物的核心表达

1. The person I admire most is... 我最敬佩的人是……

2. Of all the outstanding people， I admire...the most. 在所有杰出的人中，我最敬佩……

3. There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is... 我们周围有很多值得尊敬的人。我最敬佩的人是……

（二）人物简介与经历的核心表达

1. Born in...（place） on...（date）， he/she is...who... 生于……（日期）……（地点），他/她是……

2. devote ones life to 献身；致力于

3. After graduation from...， he/she spent most of his/her time in doing/on... 毕业后……，他（她）把他（她）的大部分时间都花在了……

4. In order to...， he/she made up his mind to do... 为了……，他/她决定做……

5. With strong will and great determination， he/she achieved great success in... 凭借坚强的意志和巨大的决心，他/她在……取得了巨大的成功。

6. Despite many difficulties， he/she managed to overcome them. 尽管有许多困难，他/她还是设法克服了。

（三）人物评价的核心表达

1. be well?known at home and abroad 享誉海内外

2. be honored as 被誉为……

3. make great contributions to 为……做出巨大贡献

4. He/She is a great scientist who is worthy of our respect. What we can learn from him/her is... 他/她是一位值得我们尊敬的伟大科学家。我们可以从他/她身上学到的是……

5. As a great...， he/she will be remembered by us forever. 作为一位伟大的……，他/她将永远被我们铭记。

6. It is his/her...that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning. 正是他/她

的……激励我在学习上遇到困难时仍继续前行。

7. Having set a great example to us， he/she is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 他/她是一个非常优秀的人，为我们树立了一个很好的榜样，完全值得我們钦佩和尊重。

三、写作支架

本次的写作任务是写一篇演讲稿，要求介绍一位我最敬佩的人，因此语篇结构可定位为“引出人物+介绍人物经历及所取得的成就+对人物进行评价或简述其影响”。人物介绍的基本框架可定位为“点题（引出人物）+正文（人物介绍）+结尾（人物评价）”。

四、语篇过手

根据以上提供的主题、主题表达和语篇结构，确定文章内容。第一段开门见山，引出人物；第二段介绍人物经历及所取得的成就；第三段对人物进行评价或简述其影响。总词数控制在80左右。

同时，学习运用前文阅读中出现的定语从句和非谓语动词的结构。尤其要注意表达的内在逻辑关系，段落内部是演绎关系、对比关系还是递进关系，需要注意使用恰当的连词。