一碗面，一份感悟

江西赣州南康区第三中学 江海连

一个晚上，作者与母亲争吵后冲出家门,出门后她才意识到手机和钱都没有带……

难词探意

1. steaming /΄stiːmɪŋ/ adj. 冒热气的

2. sigh /saɪ/ v. 叹气

That night, I quarreled with my mother, and then stormed out of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket, I did not even take my cellphone with me to make a call home.

At the same time, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodles,but I had no money!

The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked, “Hey little girl, you want to eat a bowl?”

“But...but I do not carry money...” I shyly replied.“Okay, I'll treat you,” the seller said. “Come in, I will cook you a bowl.” A few minutes later the owner brought me a bowl of steaming noodles. After eating some pieces, I cried.

“What is it?” he asked.

“Nothing. I am just touched by your kindness! ” I said as I wiped my tears. “Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, but my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel! ”

The seller sighed, “Girl, why did you think so? Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little, why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom?”

I was really surprised after hearing that.

Why didn't I think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful. My mother has raised me since I was little but I have never felt so, not even a little. I thought she was supposed to take care of me and love me. I decided that I should go home as soon as possible because someone was waiting for me.

Language Study

Useful sentence pattern

I thought she was supposed to take care of me and love me.

分析:be supposed to do...意为“应该……”。

仿写:你本该在一小时前就到这儿！

Reading Check

阅读短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:

Meanwhile, many memories came back into my mind.

Paragraph 2:

When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.

写作导引

一、析语篇，理要素

要想续写内容与所给短文之间逻辑连贯，我们必须理解所给材料的大意。 本文是一篇记叙文，文章分析如下:

二、阅读续写开头语，展开合理想象

基于原文本和续写段落首句提供的信息，采用围绕中心提相关问题的方法，构思要续写的故事情节，一般分为四步:

第一步，根据给出的文本判断文章的立意。

读完文章可知，作者因为和母亲吵架而离家出走，在一家面店里，老板的一碗面和一番话让她感触颇深。 这是一个和母爱有关的故事。

第二步，根据所给段首句推断应该续写的内容。

分析第一段的段首句可知，续写第一段要写作者与她母亲相处的相关回忆。 根据第二段的段首句可知，第二段续写应适当描写作者回到家看到的场景、心理活动、与母亲的对话，以及悔悟后的相关行动。

第三步，围绕续写第一段所给出的段首句以及上面的分析进行提问构思:

(1)What kind of memories may come back to the author's mind?

(2)How will the author feel when recalling those memories?

(3)What will the author do?

第四步，围绕续写第二段所给出的段首句以及上面的分析进行提问构思:

(1)How will the author feel when she sees her mother?

(2)What will her mother say?

(3)How will the author react to her mother's words?

三、润色成篇

在续写的过程中要注意行文连贯，各部分内容相衔接，即:1. 两段的续写与所给短文的衔接；2. 每段的续写与续写段首句之间的衔接；3. 续写的两段之间的衔接。