寓言评论写作

涂丽平

?文體概述

寓言评论就是读者读完寓言的所感所想。这种文章主要以一般过去时介绍故事情节内容，对自己感兴趣的某些地方发表观点，表达自己的想法和感受，并且把故事推荐给他人等。

Step 1 文章结构

Step 2 经典模板

Recently I read a small story from Aesops Fables whose name is （故事的名字）. What the story tells us is as follows.

（简要介绍故事的内容）.

Having read the fable， I realize that we should not （不应做的事情）. Instead， we should （应该怎么做）. Only by doing so， can we （获得的结果）.

Step 3 语言组织

一、常用开头语

1. Im delighted to introduce my favourite fable/story/novel/book to you， whose title is+标题.

2. Recently， I have read a fable， +标题.

3. The fable titled+标题 is a moral/ironic/fascinating story.

4. It tells us a story about+主角， who+非限制性定语从句.

5. In the fable， the author writes about+主角， who+非限制性定语从句.

6. The fable， +标题， is about+主角， who+非限制性定语从句.

二、主体部分常用表达

1. The purpose of the fable is to tell us that+宾语从句.

2. The fable is intended to tell people that+宾语从句.

3. The fable teaches us a lesson that+从句.

4. The fable focuses on...

5. The author made it clear that+宾语从句.

6. The fable was successful in achieving its purpose.

7. The author achieved his purpose by sth/doing sth.

8. Undoubtedly， the author has done a good job in presenting his ideas.

三、常用的结束语

1. After I read the story， I have a better understanding of...

2. Having read the story， I realized that I should （not）.../I was deeply moved by...

3. I think the story is worth reading because...

4. What impresses me most is that...

5. On the whole， I like/dislike the story because...

6. The fable teaches us a lesson that+从句.

7. I would love to share the story with all of you.

8. I would like to/I will undoubtedly recommend it to all of you.

?情境呈现

根据下面的寓言故事，写一篇评论。

The hare （野兔） and the turtle

Once a turtle was mocked by a hare for her short and slow legs， however， she did not remain silent and defended herself by throwing a laugh and saying to the hare， “You may be a very fast friend， hare， but Im more than sure that I can win a race.”

The hare， surprised by what the turtle told her， accepted the challenge without thinking twice， since she was very sure she would win the turtle with her eyes closed. Then， both proposed to the fox， that it was she who pointed the way and the goal.

Days later， the expected moment of the race arrived， and at the sound of the count of three， began the race of these two contenders. The turtle did not stop walking， but at her slow pace， she moved calmly towards the goal. The hare， on the other hand， ran so fast that she left the turtle far behind. Turning around and no longer seeing the turtle， the hare certainly saw her success over the race and decided to take a nap.

Shortly afterwards， the hare woke up and saw if the turtle was still missing from the rear， but looking towards the goal， she saw the turtle was very close to the end. Finally， the turtle won.

【佳作赏析】

Im delighted to introduce my favourite fable to you， whose title is The hare and the turtle.

The fable focuses on a race between a hare and a turtle. The hare laughed at the turtles short legs and made sure that she would win the race. In the beginning， the hare left the turtle far behind and took a nap during the race. However， when she woke up， she was desperate to see the turtle at the finishing line.

The fable teaches us a lesson that goals are achieved little by little， with work and effort. Although we sometimes seem slow， success will always come. It also shows that we do not have to mock people for their physical defects， as they may be better in other respects. This fable has great educational value and is well worth reading.

?即时训练

根据下面的寓言故事，写一篇评论。

A man from the State of Zheng bought shoes

Once in the State of Zheng， there was a man who wanted to buy a pair of shoes. He measured his foot and put the foot measurement on a chair. Then he set out for the market in a hurry， but forgot to bring it along. When he found the pair of shoes he wanted， it suddenly occurred to him that he had left the measurement at home.

He went home to get it right away. When he returned， the market had closed， and he did not get new shoes. He was very sad.

Someone asked， “Why didnt you just try on the shoes with your feet？” He replied， “Id rather trust the measurement than believe my own feet.”

?評价导思

√ Does the writer give a short description of the story？

√ Does the description include the most important details of the story？

√ Does the writer give his/her opinion about the characters or their actions？

√ Is the review well?organized？

√ Does the writer use the V?ing form as the adverbial in the review？

√ Are there any grammar， spelling or punctuation errors？