A Visit to Qingdao

A Visit to Qingdao

I went on a visit to Qingdao with my parents this summer.It is a beautiful city with so many places to visit.But what impressed me most was Laoshan Mountain.

I got up early that morning.It took us about an hour to get there by bus.Then we started to climb the mountain.There were trees and strange stones everywhere.The clean spring water few along the mountain.I took some spring water and tasted it.It was fresh and a bit sweet.We enjoyed the beautiful scenery while walking leisurely.Two hours later, we were on the top of the mountain.

It was a memorable experience.

江苏省连云港市罗阳中学 八年（2）班 王梦蕊

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陈传光，35岁，中学英语一级教师，于江苏省连云港市罗阳中学任教，从事教育教学工作13年。陈传光老师是江苏省教育学会会员、连云港市优秀教育园丁及连云港市教学工作先进个人，获得过英语专业技能大赛市一等奖。其亦在各核心和主流期刊上发表过多篇论文。